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Submitted on
November 27, 2011
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5.0 MB
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4320×3240
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Make
GENERAL IMAGING CO.
Model
X5
Shutter Speed
1/501 second
Aperture
F/4.6
Focal Length
5 mm
ISO Speed
64
Date Taken
Nov 24, 2011, 4:06:04 AM
Software
Version 1.05
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off in the distance by fatherofalllies off in the distance by fatherofalllies
Off in the distance

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:icongothicnarcissus:
The photo works quite well in expressing the concept, although the presence of well discernable anthropic objects (the flags and the fountain) may spoil a bit the sense of distance; also, the tree branches on the foreground have a rather central role and physically block the viewer from seeing what's in the distance.

Technique requires some improvement, both on a stylistical and expressive level: while the horizon is defintely crooked (albeit not enough to assume it was done on purpose) and should be fixed, having the line above the middle of the photo would have amplified the sense of distance, as the waterscape would not have been countered by the sky.

Nevertheless, the photo shows a cool view of a beautiful place with a lovely colour match. Also, it's a nice caption of the clouds and their reflection on the water, which do actually cast the viewer "off in the distance".
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:iconskh-spra:
Skh-Spra Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
so beauty,......
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:iconfatherofalllies:
fatherofalllies Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you
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Skh-Spra Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
ur welcome,.....:)
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:iconmichawolf13:
michawolf13 Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful photo!
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:iconfatherofalllies:
fatherofalllies Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you
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:iconmichawolf13:
michawolf13 Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You are welcome!
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SamsaTales Dec 18, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This looks quiet and peacefull ^_^
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:iconfatherofalllies:
fatherofalllies Dec 18, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you
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:iconyouaresoawesome:
I really love this pic!
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fatherofalllies Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you
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