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November 7, 2012
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Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS REBEL T3
Shutter Speed
1/49 second
Aperture
F/7.1
Focal Length
18 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Jul 21, 2011, 1:01:03 PM
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EF-S18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 IS II
Sensor Size
22mm
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Life falls apart by fatherofalllies Life falls apart by fatherofalllies
Life falls apart
how it feels lately
:iconshmekldorf:
Let me start out by saying this is a very nice shot what with all the colors and contrast. The horizon is nice and straight and I like the curve of the rocks and the grass to the right. This is very pretty, but it lacks a focal point. The first thing I see is the tall silhouette of the tree to the right, also it seems that everything is drawing my eyes to the right side of the picture. With all of my attention on one have of the picture the other half gets lost. Sorry, with the watermark I didn't even see the fountain. Overall the picture is very pretty but it does not hold my attention very long. I suggest you look through these tutorials on composition. They can tell you a lot more than I can. I hope this helps, keep it on!
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3u33les Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012
nice picture : )
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fatherofalllies Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you very much
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